Tuesday, September 23, 2008

The breaking sound of water

The breaking sound of water it hits me then it bounces off.
It fills so tender it fill so soft.
it smells of nothing.
it taste like salt.
As i look up to the sky the water falls into my mouth.
Then i suddenly look south it dehydrates then i suddenly look south.

...what the poem is about...
this poem is about the rain and what it sounds
like and how it fells and what it taste like.

2 comments:

Jay-Niuxs said...

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LALOIFI said...

Hae nice page and i like your poems.....